Monday, April 4, 2016

Nature Poem


Nature Poem

In the early part of spring 
You will hear the birds sing 
They are just letting, The rest
Of us know, Winter is over 
Spring melted the snow

1 comment:

  1. You gave specific details
    Your poem is higher up on the scales
    You used imagery to the best
    But you should now give your brain a rest

    You rhymed nice
    But let me give you some advice.
    I would organize
    So the rhymes can be recognize

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